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"I need a Content writer to edit my book." Sound like you?

Early in my author days, I'd send my pages to friends thinking they'd give me the truth. 


Instead, I'd get the classic, "It's good!" which means, "I have no idea what I just read!"


Turns out writing isn't the lonely act everyone romanticizes. It's a collaboration. 

You know how you can read your own chapters so many times that every word turns into alphabet soup?


I've been there. Sometimes you just need someone who gets story structure, pacing, voice, and what today's readers actually stay up past midnight for.


Here's what I do:

I step into your story like a co-creator on a mission to help you make your opening chapters irresistible. Hooks sharpened. Stakes clarified. Characters dimensional. Tone consistent. Flow smooth. Not one yawning reader in sight.


I don't hand you a checklist of problems. I tell you why they aren't working and suggestions on how to fix them with examples inside your actual pages.

Choose Your custom package

Chapter Check

Chapter Deep Dive

Chapter Deep Dive

  • Critique on first 3 chapters 
  • Margin comments 
  • Summary of key fixes
  • 3-day delivery
  • Up to 10,000 words
  • Voice & tone consistency
  • Structural edit
  • Review & critique

Choose For $40

Chapter Deep Dive

Chapter Deep Dive

Chapter Deep Dive

  • Critique on first 3 chapters
  • Light line edits on first 3 chapters
  • Margin notes
  • Detailed editorial comments
  • 5-day delivery
  • 1 Revision
  • Up to 10,000 words
  • Voice & tone consistency
  • Structural edit
  • Proofreading
  • Line edit
  • Review & critique
  • Copy edit

Choose for $95

Story Surgeon

Chapter Deep Dive

Story Surgeon

  • Critique  on first 3 chapters
  • Full developmental edit on first 3 chapters
  • Margin notes
  • Detailed comments
  • 7-day delivery
  • 2 Revisions
  • Up to 10,000 words
  • Voice & tone consistency
  • Structural edit
  • Developmental edit
  • Proofreading
  • Line edit
  • Review & critique
  • Copy edit

Choose for $175

How Serious of an author are you?

A quick heads-up: I don't take on every project. I work with authors who are serious about leveling up whether you're writing middle grade, young adult, adult fiction, or a memoir. Feel free to message me. I want to see if we're a good creative match before we dive in.

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